2015年6月英语六级作文点评汇总
试卷一:Practice is the key to knowledge
本题由谚语 “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” 引出话题,探讨知识、实践之间的关系,突出知识的必要性和实践的关键性。话题与往年出现的正确学习方式、知识的实际效用和实践带来的优势都有关联,和大学生目前的学习生活联系紧密。本题难度适中,考生对此普遍有话可说。
正如我们在考前押题中所讲,建议考生针对此话题采取三段式写作。
三段式:
第一段:简要点明本篇文章的.两个重点:知识(Nowadays almost every person has a clear notion about the importance of knowledge) 和实践(the contribution of practice should also be awarded.),其中,先铺垫知识重要性,接着用however转折引出需要重点论述的后者,过渡到下文的具体论述。
第二段:确立观点,具体论述:
原因一:实践能把抽象理论变成具体成果 (it can turn abstract ideas into tangible results.)+ 具体说明(only through…)+ 反面说明(or else…);原因二:实践可以把新旧知识串联融合(moreover,…. connects what we already knew before);原因三:实践能让人产生基于知识的新想法(In addition,…more innovative thoughts are likely to be generated)
第三段:As far as I am concerned… 总结全文,强调句重申观点。
试卷二:The Impact of Interest on People’s Success
本题要求考生就著名物理学家爱因斯坦的名言—— “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” 进行评述,提出自己的观点并举例论证。本题难点在于立意看似很高,考生需要确立主旨,结合实际,举出贴合日常生活的大众化的例子,从而化难为易、化繁为简,写出一篇有理有据的文章。
正如我们在考前押题中所讲,针对此话题考生仍然可以采取三段式写作。
三段式:
第一段:提出寓意、引出话题(As is known to all, the success of a person needs the right guidance and interest is undoubtedly the best teacher. Even Albert Einstein, the world-renowned physicist, said, “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.”) + 拉到自己较熟悉的结论观点(So it is high time that people explore and cultivate their own interest.) = 引出下一段
第二段:确立观点(Passionate curiosity can be developed in one’s childhood or in one’s sixties, but once it is ignited, it can change people’s way of study, work and living.) + 两方面论证(On the one hand/ On the other hand)
第三段:I would like to quote… 引用名言警句,总结全文。
试卷三:
本题由谚语 “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way.” 引出话题,探讨成就与大事和小事之间的关系,对“大”与“小”进行辨证理解。话题与往年出现的成功、大事小事、积累、坚持等都有关联。本题难度较大,从日常学习上升到成就与感悟,需要考生在平日多进行批判思考,才能在考场上有话可写。
正如我们在考前押题中所讲,建议考生针对此话题采取三段式写作。
三段式:
第一段:首先从对成功的渴望做铺垫(There is no doubt that many people want to be great and successful)接着转折说不是所有都能达到预期,最后点明下文论述重点:每个人都能从做小事变为大人物(everyone can achieve high by doing small things in a great way)
第二段:确立观点,具体论述:
观点一:成功需要小事的长时间积累 (only when all small accomplishments add up can many impossibilities gradually turn to possibilities);观点二:把小事做好不会让自己有遗憾(one won’t regret for not making effort to achieve the goal);最后再加例子证明:小事做好就是成功(then this person is great in the eyes of the audiences)。
第三段:Therefore… 总结全文,强调不放弃梦想,做好每件小事就是成功。
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